Nowadays air travel is cheaper than in the past. Is this a positive or a negative development? Discuss and give your own opinion.
In this modern world, air travel is essential for job, tourism and business. Due to the advancement of technology, traveling by air is inexpensive in the present scenario. Traveling in a low-cost air travel is a positive development for the mankind. In this essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of low fare air travels.
On the one hand, discounted air travels encourages more people to travel for tourism, which provides economical development of the tourist place; people would spend hotels and restaurants of the visited places which boom the income of the local people; ...
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people would spend a lot of money in hotels and restaurants of the visited places which would benefit the local community.
The low cost air travels provide low priced tickets, but the hidden cost like taxes, insurance cost and other added expenses make huge amount to travel.
Low fare air travels would not refund for the reschedule or cancel of the air ticket which leads to a huge loss of the amount.
Furthermore, low fare air travel timings mostly would be either in the early morning or in the midnight which leads to a hectic travel for the low cost travelers.
The low fare air travel produces environmental damage and tight schedule, but its benefits are essential for this technical world.
The low cost air travel and government should control emission of pollutants, reduce hidden costs and day time schedule which helps the travelers to enjoy a hassle free journey.
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people would spend hotels and restaurants of the visited places which boom the income of the local people;
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although the low cost air travels provide low priced tickets, but the hidden...
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Certainly, due to improper planning, reschedule or cancel the low cost air travel which leads to a huge loss of the amount.
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Furthermore, low fare air travel mostly in a bad schedule like either in the early morning or in the midnight which leads to a hectic travel for the low cost travelers.
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Though the low fare air travel produces environmental damage and tight schedule, but its benefits are essential
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If the low cost air travel and government control emission of pollutants, reduce hidden costs and day time schedule helps the travelers to enjoy a hassle free journey.
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