In the current world, air connectivity between the places is increasing day by day. It have lot of benefits. Out of them, the most important two are tourism and development. this essay will discuss the same.
Any mode of transportation will change the tourism landscape of the area. In particular air travel always the first choice of the tourists. One good reason for that is while traveling time is money. Because the early you reach the place the more we can spend the time at there. Air connectivity not only attracts the domestic but also the foreign travelers also. Foreign travelers will increase the foreign currency of a country. in this global economy foreign currency is a major economic factor for the country. For example take Goa state, the main source of the income is tourism. All the major beaches are connected with the air travel.
Another important benefit of the air travel is development and these two go hand in hand. For example take Hyderabad city, i would say before the international airport it is small scale city. But once international airport came, lot of opportunities are knocking the Hyderabad door. Earlier IT software exports are very less and it increased ten fold now. All the major companies opened the offshore development centers in Hyderabad. Recently, my director came from France to Hyderabad and mentioned the same. Earlier they have stop over at Mumbai. After waiting couple of hours, they need to take another connecting flight from Mumbai to Hyderabad. Which is a tiresome for the foreign nationals.
To conclude, with the increased air travel cities will closer and traveling will be faster. It is a boon to the economy of the country. So in my opinion it is positive development which is much needed for any country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, while, for example, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9364548495 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65382033778 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0741027197 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.04 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.96 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1556156514 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413490123482 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499429314291 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103413319794 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437573369243 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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