Nowadays, health problems are on alarming rate among the people due to bad environment. Few subjects opine that although there is more advanced technology, yet in future individuals would become more physically and mentally weak. I am agree with this statement and give my views in the subsequent paragraphs.
There is plethora of reasons behind my opinion, first and foremost is that the masses will do more work to amass money, therefore they will not take care of themselves and will be occupied by many ailements. In addition to that due to more work load the sterss on brain will also increase, if they do day and night job. Apart from it ,the technology is also a prime reason for this, as the inhabitants use more technolgical gadgets, instead of working physically, there will be numerous health issues owing of these gadgets. For instance, a manager in a company is doing all his work on computer while sitting on one place despite of any physical activity. It becomes a cuse of obesity, anxiety as well weak eyesight, so there will be more health problems in coming years.
Moreover, the automobiles generate more and more pollution in air that is very dangerous for mankind as there will be more usage of vehicles, consequently more people will affected by the air pollution diseases. As well as the treatments of every ailement is present howerver it is not affordable by everyone. Additionally, these treatments are done by using machines and it will sometimes failed which will be fatal. Lastly, the food chain will also disturbed because the animal species are extincting due to the human activities to enhance technology. If the fora and funa will not present than the diseases will also increase as masses eat them.
In compendium, the people's health will definately become worse in future, so inhabitants ought to use the technology in a limited manner as well as solve the environmental issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95356037152 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73988035832 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572755417957 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8333080444 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21694583552 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075430452186 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392796003429 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125263120769 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297629176302 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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