It is better for all the students to live away from home during their university studies rather than staying with their parents to what extent do you agree or disagree
It is believed that living away from parents offers innumerable benefits as compared to living with them. I partially agree with the statement as both the views have certain merits but I am slightly more in favour of living with parents. The reason why I believe so is, while living with parents one needs not to worry about expenses and food along with a constant support from family.
Students who prioritise living with family definitely have an upper hand rather than those living without family. The most preponderant reason behind this is stress free life as teenagers have access to all the facilities such as nutritious food, laundry, and accommodation. Since all the comforts are provided by the family, children can direct their entire attention towards their academic life. Besides, staying with parents not only offers constant support but also, students will never experience homesickness. During academic life one needs to tackle multiple difficulties and failures which requires a constant source of motivation and family plays a pivotal role in that. Parents can understand such situations better and can give guidance to their children as well. does Thus, choosing to stay with family is advantageous for university students.
Another noteworthy benefit is that an eagle eye can be kept on children by their guardians. Parents can monitor the activities of their children in order to prevent them from indulging into vicious habits which can be a consequence of either fleeing the parental nests or associating with bad company. So, because of above stated reasons living with parents is considered fruitful.
So, does living alone have deleterious consequences? The answer to that question is a big no. Although, living with parents has many pros, living without them also have certain merits. If students live alone they will have to live on a budget, they need to develop certain skills to manage their day to day activities such as finances. This will ameliorate their leadership and management skills which attributes towards being independent and responsible individuals.
To conclude, children living without parents definitely develop imperative skills despite this it cannot be neglected that living with parents has its own advantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3687150838 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68879379268 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0595135932 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.157894737 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317863640895 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988711521269 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050175320268 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173693869945 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495848681079 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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