There is a controversial debate over the fact that has the own residents is far better than stay at home with the parents for pupils from university. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement for the following reasons.
There are several causes for many people to explain why college pupils should not live far from home, and the major reason is the lack of love and caring that students will have. When university pupils live in an independent apartment, they will be beside them whilst they suffered from many social or college problems. They will not have anyone to express their confession. Thus, they will definitely feel lonely because no one can willing to lend sympathetic ears to their stories about their studies or their personality issues.
Whereas this case may bring loneliness to students, live far away from parents is a phenomenal way to develop independent personalities. On account of being alone, pupils will have to find out about society, community by themselves and they cannot depend on moms and dads anymore. Furthermore, society will provide to students plenty of soft skills which are really necessary for our foreseeable future. For instance, they will be taught how to spend money on the appropriate purposes, or they will be learned the way to communicate with new friends so that they can get on well with new environment and step out from their comfort zones.
To conclude, I absolutely agree with the statement that adolescents from university or college should live independently to widen their knowledge of the world that they are living in right now and broaden their horizons about their opinion.
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- The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun social seems to be countable; consider using: 'many socials'.
Suggestion: many socials
...e beside them whilst they suffered from many social or college problems. They will not have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, really, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05839416058 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66908866692 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9069040473 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344072683857 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134885208591 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098663853024 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230819571226 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703230398944 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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