It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
When they attend tertiary school, youngsters face the dilemma of whether to live on-campus or stay with their parents. While there are some benefits to stay at home with parents, I believe that living away from home would be a better option.
There are several reasons why teenagers opt for living with parents during college. Living at home could help students to cut down on various costs such as housing, food or utilities, which are main obstacles that deter learners from concentrating on their study. If students had to struggle with financial problems, they might find it difficult to pay full attention to learning. Another reason is that people would be less distracted by the surroundings when studying at home because they do not have to share the space with other peers, which in turn may be helpful to promote their academic performance.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that it would be more beneficial for university students to move out of home. Firstly, living in close proximity to campus allows students to make the most of their study and leisure time. This option not only saves students’ time commuting to class but also enables them to easily access to educational facilities such as library, labs or sports center. Secondly, campus life offers youngsters opportunities to grow up and become more self-reliant. It is inevitable that, in contrast to those who stay with parents, students who live away from parents will have to confront with a great number of problems on their own such as managing personal budgets, handling interpersonal conflict or taking care of their health. Dealing with such circumstances would equip students with corresponding skills that are necessary for them to secure a job and successful career after graduation.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are likely to be more successful in their future life if they live independently from parents soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...to move out of home. Firstly, living in close proximity to campus allows students to make the m...
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Line 5, column 927, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and successful career after graduation. For the reasons mentioned above, it seem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11285266458 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72121259469 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601880877743 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5176766355 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374374969356 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133616756765 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729681973186 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24106470447 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671689784284 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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