It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed but they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Many people hold the belief that joblessness is more beneficial than an unsatisfying job. From my perspective, no matter how advantageous unemployment can be, I disagree with this view for several reasons.
It is an undeniable fact that being unemployed can bring benefits to people in some ways. while taking an unexpected career can shape negative attitude towards work and thus decrease job productivity, being out of employment avoids stress from workplace and offers more time for the unemployed to apply for what they enjoy. Nevertheless, after a long time maintaining this state, they will fall behind peers and be put at a disadvantage in the competitive job market.
Having an unexpected job, however, contrary to common belief, can do more good than harm. In fact, this work provide a stable supply of income which reduce financial pressure put on people. this helps them afford the basic necessities of their lives. In addition to such benefits, a higher chance of their successfully applying for expected career will be created. Graduates from the University of Pedagogy, for instance, should try tutoring at home when unemployed. Thanks to this, they will be able to earn for a living and gain more experience which offer them opporturnities to teach in a school in the future.
To conclude, while unemployment can prevent people from workplace pressure, I strongly believe that this effect is twofold and applying for a job, although undesirable, is better because it can create a stable financial background before starting a new career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...bring benefits to people in some ways. while taking an unexpected career can shape n...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...educe financial pressure put on people. this helps them afford the basic necessities...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...t on people. this helps them afford the basic necessities of their lives. In addition to such ben...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90611686674 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8688651656 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281335971781 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935097338575 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600101997445 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168223749273 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567021396121 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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