It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in
today’s world?
With the world in such economic turmoil, many of us face difficult choices in managing our
money. Personally, I feel that saving is preferable to high spending, and I will explain why.
Firstly, saving money is a sensible precaution in a world where the future is uncertain. It is
possible, for example, that a person might meet unemployment, ill health or other crises at some point
in life. It is essential to have some funds in reserve for these situations, and saving is for most people
the only way to achieve this. Furthermore, I believe that saving is itself a good discipline for people
to develop, as it builds skills of planning and reaching targets. We can see this in the way that
disciplined people build up quite large sums through small monthly contributions to savings plans. In
many cases this meets important objectives in their lives, including large purchases such as cars or
property. Finally, we have to remember the reasons for the current economic problems besetting the
world. The crisis was caused by excessive spending and insufficient saving – not just by individuals,
but by corporations and even governments themselves. I feel that an emphasis on sensible saving
should be a universal strategy now.
I do appreciate that some people think differently, saying that it is better to live for the moment
and spend accordingly. While some daily spending is essential, of course, I feel this is a potentially
unwise viewpoint, especially considering recent global events.
To conclude, I believe that saving is the wiser course, not just for financial but also for
personal and political reasons. Sensible saving is an invaluable skill and a buffer against uncertainty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, i feel, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91081507275 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8221185736 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219605224555 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072729318723 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351165076712 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652007179954 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517463672485 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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