It is better for young to get an advice from old people than young people Do you agree or disagree
It is quite evident that suggestions help to assure people as pertaining to any requirement get an advice from senior citizens is more beneficial than younger ones. This essay will describe the points of disagreement in succeeding subsection.
To commence with, younger generation has more knowledge and will educated in contrast to older people which make them enough mature to give and kind off suggestions to their peers and siblings as regards to any thing such as in terms of study solely younger ones can recommend superiar advice as they have updated knowledge than old ones. Therefore, teenagers should prefer to get an advice from adults instead of senior citizens. Besides this understanding level of youngsters are similar and they can easily understand the perpose of advice and solve it by joint.
In order to justify the point of view that generation gap can also creat difference between level of thinking such as sometimes the suggestion of older folks are completely hard aa per their opinions which has become difficult for youngsters to take an accurate decision of their lives. Although senior citizens have greater experience, it cannot work in every field . All in all, over aged people has less knowledge regarding the things of high tech epoch like study, work, fashion, technology, and many more.
To conclude, I firmly believe that youngsters should take suggestions from younger people aa per their requirement and perpose because they has become better mentor as compare to senior natives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...le as pertaining to any requirement get an advice from senior citizens is more beneficial...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'educate'
Suggestion: educate
... generation has more knowledge and will educated in contrast to older people which make ...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... their peers and siblings as regards to any thing such as in terms of study solely young...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers and siblings as regards to any thing such as in terms of study solely younger...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...erefore, teenagers should prefer to get an advice from adults instead of senior citizens....
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...xperience, it cannot work in every field . All in all, over aged people has less k...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ir requirement and perpose because they has become better mentor as compare to seni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, regarding, so, therefore, as regards, in contrast, kind of, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19918699187 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64027836452 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.580726621 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.111111111 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18861778655 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763644349007 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687136342629 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123166364862 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452417487269 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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