it is crucial for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. do you agree or disagree with the statement?
it is undeniable to have open areas like squares and parks in urban settings. while I agree with the statement because such spaces are often necessary to the cities and towns to reduce congestion, get relaxation from busy life and conduct some public gatherings as a whole.
There are many reasons why large public spaces offer huge benefits to the people around the city and visitors. firstly, it would deduct overcrowding around the city center by roaming people and open marketers. The public often gets relaxing time in the parks, and pitchmen could get an opportunity to sell their product irrespective of disturbances to the busy people in the town. secondly, city livers would have an isolated place to spend their free time to relax and enjoy with dear and near ones from these kinds of spaces. For instance, the national park in the Trivandrum district offers many public meetings and social gatherings without disturbing the general public.
however, large public spaces sometimes consume more areas of towns may lead to minimal developments and advancements in the heart of the city. These squares and parks often need more land for advanced services, spectacles seatings, and facilities. Owing to the fact that towns may suffer from traffic congestion, transportation problems, and so on. for example, consumption of public squares in Bangalore city makes higher costs to reach by taxi services in terms of one-way traffic and excessive visitors.
In summary, communal spaces like parks and squares makes some disturbances in public and cities nevertheless, such places are inevitable in the city development and essential to the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24436090226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68469751906 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5880786596 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35640600091 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122281754045 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063545028554 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228209844111 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464780118932 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.