It is generally agreed that the amount of rubbish created by humans today is a worldwide problem. What do you think are the main causes of this situation? What measures can be used to tackle the problem?
Amongst numerous modern world problems, the immense bulk of waste created by human is admittedly of one the most significant ones. Several causes play a role in this universal issue. The unprecedented population grow, the waste management deficiencies, and irresponsible use of products are a few examples. Below, I will explain amore about the causes and solutions regarding this matter.
The most obvious reason for the produced amount of rubbish is the population increase. Population growth brings new complications with itself which is adversely affecting the humanity. It is believed that if the current eight billion citizens continue to expand with the same rate, there will be no space left to dispose the produced trash. With the current speed of waste disposal, the earth simply does not have the capacity to revived itself. Therefore, new educational programs for families could be effective in bring awareness especially in under-developed countries.
Secondly, civilizations have moved towards consuming a surpass number of unnecessary products which will eventually turn into rubbish. The media outlets have contributed considerably in advertising lucrative products and tempting people to purchase more. One solution to control the waste is if governments invest on programs that teach citizens about the repercussions of consumerism and encourages them to be more environmentally conscious when persuaded to buy a an item.
Last but not least, most of the today's products are made out of plastic. Plastic microfibers and other toxic chemicals even exist in cosmetic products. That means that almost all of us are inadvertently contributing to the irreversible changes on our surrounding environment. Waste management companies should increase their capacity in recycling disposals and people should be encouraged to use recycled goods. Lowering the prices and using influencers as role models are two good strategies to accomplish this. There should also be new regulations that forces manufacturers to reduce using plastic and un-degradable materials in their products as much as possible. On the contrary, the use of biodegradable and environmentally friendly good should be praised and awarded.
In conclusion, with the current speed of waste production, the earth will become an inhabitable place in near future. Reasons for this issue are high reproduction rate, the attitude of consumerism which is ironically advocated by the society norms and media, and poor waste management of plastic and other hazardous material. If proper strategies are implemented in time, we can hope that we might be able to tackle the disastrous consequences that will emerge in future.
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: a; an
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...isastrous consequences that will emerge in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55474452555 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12449307993 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1802362051 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.772727273 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118070804422 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333899490829 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026562761188 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620491630441 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289204476445 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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