It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication, but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.

It is true that now a days internet making our life easy. We can communicate to others through all over the world.

In a good way, internet giving us a lot of information. people can do world wide web and search anything they want. With a just simple click they can get information of like public health, education, sports, news and many more rather than buying a newspaper. There are many sites online through which people can learn many things like cooking, knitting, mathematics problems.
But, on the other hand, it has some bad effects.Firstly, People use to surf on the internet all over the day due to that they are getting obese. Secondly, there are many fake news updated by news channels so, it is difficult to find which news is real and fake. I think it is better to communicate people directly. People get more information from other people by communication without the internet.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
It is true that now a days internet making our life easy. We can c...
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Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
It is true that now a days internet making our life easy. We can c...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...nternet giving us a lot of information. people can do world wide web and search anythi...
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Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...the other hand, it has some bad effects.Firstly, People use to surf on the internet all...
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Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...it has some bad effects.Firstly, People use to surf on the internet all over the da...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much fake news', 'a good deal of fake news'.
Suggestion: much fake news; a good deal of fake news
... are getting obese. Secondly, there are many fake news updated by news channels so, it is diff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i think, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 156.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65786113976 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8425724523 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12350571786 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540150536432 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415887548713 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775298511006 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427412768793 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 78.4519038076 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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