It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about certain talent of human. While some people argue that there are many people who are born with natural talent and others are not,i believe any one can be a well sports person or musician.
There are a number of people who have natural talent in our society and it also bloom naturally from their childhood. If a person come of with musician talent, his/her trend will be at music. Many time of his/her life will spend about it. Similarly, when a kid bear with football talent, his/her aptitude will be at football. If have a look at film industry, we can see there are a range of actors or actress who become a film star without any related Institute where sing,acting and dancing are taught. God gifted persons practice themselves and also assist others. At the time they may get chance national team afterwards international.
On the one hand there are good member of people who grow without any natural talent but they also can be good film star or politician. There is a proverb in English that is practice makes a man perfect, so if a man wants to be a singer, he has to a lot of practice. When parents give proper guide line or teach well their children. Otherwise a child overcomes anything anyhow. For example, while a girl would like to be a actress, she has to done a many exercise. At the same way, a kid like to become a cricketer so he/she are taught by instructor then he/she will be a good cricketer.
In conclusion, it’s seems to me that although natural talented people has extra merit and it's revealed his/her intentionally and any children cen be good at any profession if they want as well as are taught.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, similarly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56333333333 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47038233658 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.837901749 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289869003325 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881459405105 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897114235408 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196699630527 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103509474425 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.