It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether those successful sportsmen or musicians are born to be or taught to be. While the process of learning music or doing sport training is beneficial to cultivate people in their childhood, I believe that talent depends the most.
Someone argues that teaching plays the most important part in becoming successful person whether in terms of sport or music. Firstly, each child is born to be the same, with no developed brain system to react to our world. Secondly, teaching surroundings influence kid unconsciously. If a child is exposed to a neighborhood that people around him are all into music, he will have a big possibility to be sensitive to melodies. Finally, learning approaches is also a vital part of it. There is no doubt that effective methods are the best way to improve one’s skills, while music and sport are no exception. That’s the reason why so many accomplished sport figures are from well-known teams and trained by experienced coaches.
On the other hand, it is perhaps even more significant to stress the inseparable impact of children’s talents on their future developments. I believe that the term ‘gene’ is able to explain this kind of phenomenon. Although all the children are born to be unconscious but every child owns various genes which are inherited by their ancestors. The result is people in their childhood show sensitivities and preferences to different things. Because their inborn talents, these kids are more easily to gain a sense of accomplishment and such emotion encourages them to have more practice, therefore, a positive circle is built.
In conclusion, I can understand why people might promote the view that teaching helps in fostering a great sportsman or musician, but it seems to me that genius is much more necessary in this celebrity’s career life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16447368421 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06089370787 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2055288637 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221487357013 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655591668845 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494439549816 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131726090049 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610097033235 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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