When it comes to human talent, there is an ongoing debate over ‘whether we are born with it or have to achieve it’. Some people claim that we must inherit certain talents and it is not possible to create successful people no matter how much effort we put on them or how much they try. I believe efforts are not everything to be a great athlete or musician and some inherited talent is required to be an extraordinary person.
Some people insist that there are lots of good examples that some people achieve their goal of life despite their lack of certain talent in part of sport or music. For example, Park Ji-sung, was a captain of Manchester United and no one believed that he will be a good sportsman because of his poor body conditions. He could not have spotlighted as a good sportsman if he did not keep trying to be a good soccer player. Finally, he became one of the most popular soccer players in my country. It is a good example that efforts are the most important factor to achieve our goal.
On the other hand, the reasons why I think people are born with certain talents is that, first of all, each person has different strong points. We can easily see people are unique and they distinguish themselves when they are children. Especially in part of sport of music the talent can be found significantly. Secondly, in order to become a famous person in certain fields like sport or music, they should have a hereditary strength. For example, if someone wants to be a pianist and does not have a sense of rhythm, they could not be a great pianist. I think efforts have limited effect on both sports and music.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for views and certain talents are given to us, but I am convinced that people have their own strong points when they are born.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5626911315 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47404202693 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519877675841 0.561755894193 93% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0811431206 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305161328713 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100663539188 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536737090932 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175073605657 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050758620422 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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