It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As there are increasingly more adepts in numerous aspects such as sport and music, opinion has been divided on the significance of aptitude and practice. Although I accept that natural abilities could be an advantage for some people, I am against the idea that regular training fails to create excellent people.
Advocates of talents usually argue that it is proposed that such faculties allow individuals to excel, while laborious students never manage to reach a comparable level. In other words, those who have upper starting point are likely to be more favorable than others and have many opportunities to extend in particular fields, including music and sport.
Despite the preceding arguments, I support the view that frequent exercise plays an essential role in the success of a person. For example, gifted musicians or sports stars have to experience continuous drill to achieve outstanding results and without training, talented people would not learn how to exploit and grow their endowments. It is extremely advantageous because the training could be performed in the early period of a child’s life. Thus, practice is necessary for achievements.
In conclusion, I agree that innate gifts bring people several benefits, but to be more brilliant in areas such as sport and music, then practice is required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t and music, then practice is required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32380952381 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83177628285 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695238095238 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3649288693 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.222222222 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208664337577 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744316110455 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350705821255 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115633166716 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272343332342 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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