It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be thought to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Certain individuals are widely thought to have special talents such as sports and music which others lack. Although, children can be made professionals athletes and singers as sometimes claimed by others. This essay will discuss these believes and my opinion will be given inline with the latter.
To begin with, some group opined that training children can make them better athletes and musician, I also believe so. This is because if a child who is said to have a special talent from birth and he/she is not worked on,such talent will be useless. An appropriate tutor should be employed to take these children in order to build their talent and make them professionals in their chosen skills. For instance, a set of pupils from a basic school were examined on different skills they were good at, it was observed that kids with additional training did excellently well.
On the other hand, some also are of the opinion that kids are with inborn talents. This children are believed to be able to well on their own without any tutoring, reason being that they showed interest in different skills especially games and music and doing well without any support. For example, a group of children ages between 3 and 10years were brought together for competition in Nigeria, it was gathered that those still under 5years of age did excellently well and it was believed these children were not taught as they acted in their innocent behavior.
Conclusively, although it is widely that some children have inborn talents such as games and music, some are of the opinion that kids should be tutored to become professionals in their chosen skills. While the inborn attributes of a child can't be overlooked such as being a genius in their activities, it is also the best practice to help them develope their talents through training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92233009709 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50553163118 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7306892315 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235676095878 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923781809807 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367637075917 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152509201734 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556637548246 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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