It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication Do the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawbacks Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own k

Globalization is becoming one of the essential aspects that impressing the business and the connection of countries. Thus, there is a discussion over the issue of whether the advantages of this phenomenon should be ranked above its disadvantages.

To begin with, since the countries globally opened to do business, the economic situation of the world at all had has some improvements significantly. In particular, big corporations tend to hire employees coming from developing countries owing to their low-cost salary. The result is handling the problems of unemployment in remote areas. By contrast, although these organizations create many job opportunities for developing-country inhabitants, it will be threats. The bigger the business is, the bigger its marketing share is. Therefore, if these foreign organizations dramatically grow year by year, the national ones will overwhelm.

In terms of communication, accessing the world, the citizen can get knowledge about the endless global information including economy, economics, politics, educations, cultures and so on. Following that, the developing country can learn good strategies from the developed ones to improve their community. Besides, communicating globally can face some serious cons. For example, currently, the infective disease called Covid-19 has happened in the world, especially in China. It is dangerous to visit tourist attractions which easily meet foreign people because this virus can quickly spread through the air if people are not well protected.

Generally, globalization is considered to be a two-face aspect. Besides the advantages it brings back, we should alert its disadvantages and prepare suitable strategies to face them.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in particular, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81027667984 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28778210386 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683794466403 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5394155521 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127683037696 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402616838874 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039639831166 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682939663393 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279545184376 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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