It has been suggested that primary school childern should learn how to grow vegetables and raise animals.Do advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
In this ongoing epoch, some people assert that primary school ought to provide training to students regarding gardening and farming because nowadays children losing their connection with nature. Similarly, I think it's advantages are far more than disadvantages which presented ahead.
To begin with, it might be proved worthwhile for pupils. Since, these lessons will help scholars to increase their attachment with ecosystem. To elaborate it, if schools organize camps, students get motivation about distinct vegetables and animals which are essential for whole nature. Moreover, by this they try to grow vegetables at home and adapt farm animals like buffaloes, cows and so on, which helps them to get information about their food and habitation. For instance, studies continuously belives that more than 70% of pupils take part in these training to learn more about environment.
Furthermore, this trend also have one more merit, they become more responsible. Additionally, when primary children get lessons about gardening and farming, they may be showed keen interest in work which will probably help them to get employment in upcoming time. To add it, students also develop time management skills through these works.
On the flip side, this aspect brings some negative impact on pupils. Firstly, it may deprived them from their academics when they spend their entire time on planting and farming. More precise, scholars lose interest in other subjects due to this training.
To conclude, although this lessons offers a negative trait on students. However, I still believe that connection with surrounding and more responsible are two main pros which makes it more unique and positive rather than offering some deleterious aftermaths.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...% of pupils take part in these training to learn more about environment. Furthermore...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, still, while, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49259259259 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65295083787 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637037037037 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9669330546 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970407473355 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323178469197 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044901695201 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517505509466 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513086106558 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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