In today's highly competitive market, the efforts and decisions will decide whether can lead to a successful career path as soon as possible. And the issue as to whether it is significant for participants in a knowledge-based society to take risks in single-person and professional lives has remained a source of controversy. Personally, I completely agree with this notion and I'm of the belief that still having the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this situation.
On the one hand, Taking risks can lead to success from both two angles. In terms of professional lives, The competitiveness between big companies as well as investing budgets into latter-day infrastructure or marketing campaigns to enhance the company's image. By contrast, the abuse of these factors can result in some risks and make bad conditions for consumer clients. So taking risks also help them summarize the lessons about business strategies and advance hands-on experiences to take into consideration separately in investing. In terms of personal lives, it can be attributable to impulsive mistakes or inexperience in all aspects of life. For example, with a single-person life, they can be able to suffer from isolation or loneliness day by day and seem to be no direction. and they all need to be a shoulder to rely on in any case. But taking risks will help them empathize with themselves and research solutions to tackle this issue.
On the one hand, taking risks without thinking thoroughly will bring with its detrimental effects. if an investor overestimates their abilities and does not have a certain deliberation in any circumstances, they will be a failure in solving these works as well as giving misguided decisions. This can make people sack the company or go to the verge of bankruptcy. And in the remained angle, it is indispensable that they will difficulty in paying for daily expenses and recreational activities. This makes them feel embarrassed and pessimistic about their parents and other relationships.
In conclusion, taking risks is a practical ability, and deciding whether they can stand more maturely after these failures in both their professional lives and their lives. From these aforementioned ideas, I still hold fast to the belief that it can appear the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in our life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...path as soon as possible. And the issue as to whether it is significant for participants in a...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...I completely agree with this notion and Im of the belief that still having the adv...
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Line 2, column 784, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...day by day and seem to be no direction. and they all need to be a shoulder to rely ...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ill bring with its detrimental effects. if an investor overestimates their abiliti...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...outweigh the disadvantages in our life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22192513369 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1950663392 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548128342246 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2633690703 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322939732654 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928131521737 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873289158571 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205222820686 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595115104298 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.