In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

In today's highly competitive market, marketing campaign is one of the most commercial forms in the recent tendency, and Advertising is a typical campaign. There is often debate that businesses usually highlight their products to enhance the company's images as well as confirm the position on the competitive commercial market. Personally, I think it is an advantageous employment in many aspects. I would outline my reasons in this essay below.
To begin with, There have several underlying reasons for corporated employers to advertise their products by emphasizing. They want to attract customers' attraction which can also lead to bring the impression to prospective clients, simultaneously, creating a sense of urgency and exclusivity. Moreover, They also want to differentiate themselves from their competitors and show that they are innovative and blow into competitive commercial market a peculiar trendy as well as set off their own styles of products, which may affect to the changing needs and preferences.
Another reason for massive propensity that they highlight their brand for customers to appreciate the quality of products, to be specific, it can also meet the greater demand for the curiosity of customers about the characteristics, features and the usage of products the most efficiently.. For example, new products that are more environmentally friendly, more efficient, more afforadble, or more convenient can improve life's people and tackle spontaneous risks or positive problems.So on, This results in enhancing the merits of images and their brand on the commmercial market and manipulating targeted audience.
In conclusion, It is important for organisations to emphasise their products for customers. Of course, advertising need to be tied to offering customer's needs and requirements and their counterparts also should demand more transparency and accountability from businessies to strengthen this relationship and build up a potential commercial market.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6835016835 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30407867848 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5658976557 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.454545455 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213720480585 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084160270411 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506171513129 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134496191869 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261347339533 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...utline my reasons in this essay below. To begin with, There have several underl...
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...to the changing needs and preferences. Another reason for massive propensity th...
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Suggestion: .
...e usage of products the most efficiently.. For example, new products that are more...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: So
... spontaneous risks or positive problems.So on, This results in enhancing the meri...
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...aneous risks or positive problems.So on, This results in enhancing the merits of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t and manipulating targeted audience. In conclusion, It is important for organ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6835016835 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30407867848 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5658976557 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.454545455 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213720480585 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084160270411 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506171513129 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134496191869 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261347339533 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.