Nowadays, it is argued that taking risks in both work and personal lives is crucial. From my point of view, setting oneself in challenging and unpredictable situation can bring more plus points which outweigh its drawbacks in both aspects.
First factor, making unforeseen activities can lead to a great deal of repercussion, which might be out of control. Due to the fact that ones decide without doubt, many problems which is uncovered and hardly thought of, can have large influence and result in the worst consequence. Another aspect to be mentioned, when choosing to take risks, ones do not actually keep in mind of their negative impact on people around you. For example, in professional environment, solving tasks and difficulties without foreseeing its results, especially which involve financial or profit factors, can make ones and their line managers take responsibilities.
On the other hand, taking risks can have significant advantages. It can be clear that unpredictable changes lead to surprising opportunities. While conventional actions can result in acceptable outcome, ones break the riles with thorough analysis can be prompt to get better chances other than bad consequence. For instance, with shortage of financial support, ones can barely think of going studying overseas. However, ones take risks by borrowing money, it would be beneficial long-term investment. Other thing to be considered is that reckless actions can challenge ones better, especially in work. Putting oneself in difficulties, ones may have more chances to explore more potentials of oneself, break the limit and develop in more favorable extend, If ones work as a position they do not take interest in, and they decide to start a new career lacking related skills, they might have to be through obstacles, but eventually, they will get the dream job they chase. Last but not least, being in reckless situation can evoke brenad new inspiration and willing to live and to work in more energetic way.
Although taking risks can lead to some repercussion, with thorough consideration, it can result in significant advantages which outweigh shortcoming and bring the better version of oneself.
In conclusion, while taking risks may lead to both negative consequence, its positive aspects can lead ones to more lively lives.
- The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
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- The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 636, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... work. Putting oneself in difficulties, ones may have more chances to explore more p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34604904632 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91600240662 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558583106267 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4597515651 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.625 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225927072323 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900791171458 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935591659384 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152484283656 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389145480797 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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