It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that struggle in any thing in life make you successful. Some people believe that having risks in your daily routine and in your professional carrier is an essential. I completely agree with this essay that there are some benefits of risk that overcome its drawback and I support my opinion with examples.
First of all, people moving in other countries for herself and their family. However, to improve their living style and to improve their skills. For an instance, people moving for their higher education in UK and America to complete it and earn more money for family. Moreover, it is risky to leave your homeland but they do.
Another reason, why the people takes risk to improve their family life style that they are switching their business. By this I mean, most of the people starting their business on a small scale such as a single shop but they want to increase their business of making a restaurant so they take the risk to change this. Furthermore, mostly people change their jobs from one company to another for their betterment. Moreover, I strongly believe that it is dangerous but they avail the opportunities for making their life better.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of taking risking in the carrier. Mostly by switching the job you are comfortable with the environment it would destroy your peace. For example, if you are working in your own country but in another city you can meet your love ones once in a week or month while, you are in other country you will visit your homeland after 3- 4 year. As result, you feel like lonely.
In conclusion, it is a common believe that benefits of risky life in any profession ar in personal life is very important. I believe in moving other counties for earning or for studies these types of risks make your life better. Also, it is true in switching in business is also dangerous. Personally, I think there are some pros and cons of changing your routine.
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- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledg 73
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledg 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
It is true that struggle in any thing in life make you successful. Some peopl...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s for herself and their family. However, to improve their living style and to imp...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risk improving'.
Suggestion: risk improving
.... Another reason, why the people takes risk to improve their family life style that they are s...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... in another city you can meet your love ones once in a week or month while, you are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, i mean, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6773255814 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44499902119 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8989665335 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6842105263 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395022496158 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115674447609 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621654728433 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206259032265 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462733245159 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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