It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been a difference in opinion as to whether governments should provide help internationally or domestically. In my view, although helping people all over the world is impractical, I do not agree with those who argue that governments should only take care of their own citizens.
On the one hand, I think that the plans of the world’s leaders to provide aid globally is unachievable. First, it is challenging for governments of developed countries to offer help to the nations in separated places because of enormous number of the underprivileged and logistical difficulties, . For example, the American government has to deal with many obstacles when delivering goods or facilities to poor regions in Africa, where people are facing poverty and epidemic diseases. Second, I believe that governments should prioritize expenditure on the welfare state of their own nations. Allocating resources to important areas such as education, health care, as well as stabilizing the economy and politics should be government priorities.
On the other hand, I still argue that government should make all efforts to help as many people as they can. In many underdeveloped countries, the leaders have been carrying the burden of domestic poverty and social problems such as food shortages, terrorism, and epidemic diseases, which are only solved by aid from affluent nations. Unless the poor countries are provided subsidies, they will be pushed to the verge of bankruptcy. Additionally, developed countries are able to support the others through international bodies, such as non-government organisations, which are responsible for providing assistance to people in need.
In conclusion, although helping all people over the world is unachievable, I still believe that the more aids governments provide for other people, the better our world will be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...There has been a difference in opinions as to whether governments should provide help interna...
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Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...zing the economy and politics should be government priorities. On the other hand, I sti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51546391753 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20461429695 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4047488441 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.75 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309229110967 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115063679736 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947273014183 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213027530223 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784629373788 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.