it is inevitable that as technology advances traditional cultures will be lost. it seem that we cannot have these things together.to what extend do you agree or disagree this statement?
It is argued that advanced technology and ancestral cultures are difficult to get on, because innovative technology is indispensable, which may loosen the real conventional civilization. In my opinion, I strongly disagree that we can have both things united and move on to the tradition with inventive technology. Firstly, this essay will explain the fact that in accordance with modern technology like internet and television, traditional cultures can maintain, and secondly, convergence of these can make both things better as well.
It is often important that to reduce the unmissable cultures from ancestors. As far as as technology rose up, which would be used for to keep on such tradition. In other words, modern technology has different kinds of application to customize the things which we need, so that synchronize such ancestral civilization in flourished manner for future. For example, most of the Indian traditional cultures namely, Holy,Deepavali, were lost during the British ascendancy, whereas, which they are updated by the help of modern technology such as television program to improve the knowledge regarding their tradition for the future generation.
Improvised conventional cultures would make new technology to hike up in international level. Globally developed technology would make authenticated traditional cultures in natural are more flexible to upcoming generation all over the world. Moreover, people wants to know everything on the finger tip so that, advanced technology could help the people to upgrade their inquisitive nature.For instance, obsolescent cultures of a nation could rewind by different sites in the internet and which would be recorded for future use and thereby people can visit such sites for their personal use and then the technical team can get allowance by visitors too.
in conclusion, development of advanced technology could help the ancestral cultures to keep on safe in one way or other so that, joint both things would help people to treat their culture in well preserved, which would likely to have success by advanced technology .
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220670391061 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.13687150838 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.13687150838 0.0946595960268 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0474860335196 0.0501214627716 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0307262569832 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13687150838 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0223463687151 0.0403226058552 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02913036518 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036312849162 0.0326793684256 111% => OK
Particles: 0.00558659217877 0.00163938923432 341% => OK
Determiners: 0.0698324022346 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0446927374302 0.021408717616 209% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0167597765363 0.011925033212 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2117.0 1933.35771543 109% => OK
No of words: 325.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.51384615385 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406153846154 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.28 0.203846283523 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.2 0.137316102897 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02913036518 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.3849807549 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 29.5454545455 20.7743622355 142% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.3151139595 49.517814964 197% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.454545455 127.492653851 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5454545455 20.7743622355 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 0.814263465372 201% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 61.5454545455 49.1944974215 125% => OK
Elegance: 1.76623376623 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235965029209 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12734255922 0.102741220458 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0919397154299 0.0668466124924 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.612671749909 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187095480981 0.148594505496 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127341397561 0.134430193775 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504354774222 0.0742795772207 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382349035018 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0321522399324 0.0638462369009 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171241302276 0.228012699653 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632763566572 0.058150111329 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.