It is more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history. How far do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world, the question of a deeper study of local rather than world history is increasingly being raised.My essay below will analyze both the benefits and the drawbacks ofthe dispute.
The study of local history is more important than world history in certain aspects.Firstly, a deeper study of local history allows people to analyze the mistakes of their ancestors and not repeat them in the future in relation to their own people and to others. Indeed, history is cyclical. If everyone pays a little more attention to the past of their country, then in the future people will be able to avoid civil wars and coups.Secondly, knowledge of the history of their country affects the education and versatility of the individual. Every self-respecting person should know about the history, first of all, of their people. Only then can a person feel like a full-fledged citizen of their homeland.
From an opposite angle, world history is no less important in relation to local history.First, the history of the whole world contains much more contains more historical events of different countries that individually chose the path of solutions in the same situations. So, people can make choices based on the past of ancient civilizations.Second, in order to learn from someone else's experience in any field or to solve internal and external problems.Almost every state adopted the experience of other countries, which made it possible to make changes or develop science, life, culture, and business.
Inconclusion,it should be noted that the study of history, both world and local, remains an important stage in people's lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03887990759 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549242424242 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.8100809572 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.333333333 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313821324597 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128415045848 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869832356308 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172822279644 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720064246967 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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