It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
"The roots of education are bitter, but the fruit is sweet".it is crucial for children that learn their local culture's history more than world's past.This easy will emphasis on certain reasons of my agreement to a greater extent. Yet several circumstances can not be ignored before reaching to the logical conclusion.
To begin with,the first and foremost reason is that, first students should learn native tradition in order to know more and more about their country. There are myriad children who have no respect for country, if we teach them our culture they feel proud. Moreover, they get good source of knowledge too. For the example, schoolchildren learnt about taj mahal in school, they become able to give that information to local people as well as visitors.
Further more, it has a lot of other benefits such as earning money in manifold tourist places, they get more awareness to prevent those historical sites. Even though, it is indispensable that learn global history, first of all they get much knowledge of their own nation. For instance , Indian culture shows respect, discipline and many more , which is beneficial for our better life. Another thing is , we learn plenty of different things from past like agriculture, architecture, social skills and so on.Thus, I believe that leaning local history is the best part of education.
To sum up, I strongly tend to think that , instead of leaning whole planet's past culture and tradition, school teens should learn their own country's history.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17004048583 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65082488847 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688259109312 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5121656308 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.090909091 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244681380538 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769701676982 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579953783921 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134041139596 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456024985842 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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