It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world
history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
History play important role in the life of human and many masses believe that local and globle history is very importent to learn . According to me native history is less usefull than world history
To commence with benefit of local history for the offspring. To explain it, mainly living of people depend on their history because, they follow the custom and culture, which gave by their ancestors in this way student easly all these things by doing study about their native history. Along with this, it give them the power as their forebear do lot of struggle.
On the other hand, globle past have more affective then local history. The first and formost point is that people settel easly in every place in world. In other words, now masses move to other nation for finding jobs and fir doing work while, sometime they face difficulty to live their as they not know about tradition but if they get knowledge about international history from their school time they not have to do nuch struggle to live their. Moving further, history also play main role in researches because, many people from different nation discovered many thing which is very helpful in inovation. For example, Albert Einstein invent low of gravity by which now scientist easly imagine the life in space.
In conclusion, both history have their own importantance while, international history helpful to everyone in the world but local history only for some people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32023572393 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561983471074 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5183371864 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.222222222 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0382622498124 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158679227688 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0193287320172 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0233857555452 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143362863573 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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