It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos,...) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that an inevitable process for animal species to die out (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos,..). There is no reason why people try to stop this from happening. While there might be some supporting arguments, I still disagree with this view due to more convincing reasons.
On the one hand, this opinion seems reasonable simply because Protecting endangered species could be a waste of time and money in some cases. To illustrate, these species, such as flamingoes and rare bears, often become extinct although they are protected by government and activists. Thus, it might be too difficult for humans to prevent unexpected this phenomenon.
In spite of the arguments above, I highly go against this view for the following reasons. The first argument is that animal species which become extinct may bring commercial many benefits to human beings. For example, endangered animals which live in national parks often attract tourists throughout the world. Hence, these animals are likely to boost the development of local tourism, and this may create employment for local people.
Another reason is that threatened species could have a great positive influence on public. For instance, the information about endangered species which is shown in media raise people's awareness about climate change and pollution. Therefore, it might encourage people to take part in environmental protection.
In conclusion, although I recognize possible arguments to accept the discussed view, there are more convincing reasons to believe this idea is unreasonable
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... species to die out e.g. Dinosaur, dodos,... There is no reason why people try to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., first, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44813278008 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75119693122 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639004149378 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8446019352 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318527866765 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103325863133 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778549350008 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158959829135 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925307910576 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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