Some people say that people should have a different amount of holidays according to their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people believe that people should have a various number of holidays in according with their employment. While there might be some opposing arguments, I still agree with this view because of more convincing reasons.
On the one hand, this opinion seems unreasonable simply because having a different amount of holidays according to their job has a negative impact on the psychology of workers. For example, many people feel jealous of their managers and co-workers who have more holidays. Therefore, it could make people feel lazy, and this reduces their work performance.
In spite of the arguments above, I highly support this view for the following reasons. Firstly, having a various number of holidays in according with their employments might bring many benefits to the social lives of people. Taking many people like soldiers, sailors, and truck drivers as an example, they have longer holidays compared to other people. As a result, These people have more time to spend with their family members. In addition, they might avoid social isolation, and therefore less suffer from depression and other mental diseases. Another good reason is that having a different number of holidays according to their employments ensures the health of workers. For instance, nurses and doctors who do overtime evenings have a negative impact on their health. As a consequence, they need to have more time off to recover after many night shifts
In conclusion, although I recognize possible arguments to argue against the discussed view, there are more convincing reasons to believe that people should have a various number of holidays according with their jobs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24905660377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58180505405 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524528301887 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9026990552 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421827224437 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159425552115 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103734135042 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294424177369 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559260066619 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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