It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Parenting is a sacred responsibility and some need preparation to aid them through the phrase. For that reason, I completely agree that a training course is a necessity for modern parents in order to raise up their kids well.
First of all, good parenting requires numerous skills and knowledge. Some minor mistakes or negligence can put their child in jeopardy. Attending in the course can provide them with advises from expertise on how to take good care of your offspring. Since many are not aware of the vital part of nutrient to a kid’s brain and body. As science has shown that half of a child’s brain is developed in the first few years of his or her age. Therefore, it is essential for parents to know what is the finest food for the development of a child.
Furthermore, these courses have a great value to parents who want to make sense of their children’s behavior throughout every phrase. Especially when children grow older and become teenagers, they tend to be quieter and less likely to open up with their parents. Parents should learn the art of changing the negative behaviors of a child without being violent or abusive by listening to their confidence or letting them have their own personal space, etc. Consequently, the bond between parents and children grows stronger and the generation gap get smaller.
To conclude, parenting tuition classes are of Paramount importance in raising an offspring as they give parents a great deal of instruction.
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- It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words 61
- It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, so, therefore, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.916 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73907721687 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5170869966 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281282640771 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887823762841 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074552353196 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164046279878 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555287080866 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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