A segment of society opines that the authorities should allocate on more urgent problems instead of investing on solutions that can ameliorate biodiversity crisis. I completely disagree with this statement considering some underlying reasons offered below.
The quantity of money used to save our nature is not enough compared to what it should be. It was estimated that over the last decade, less than 3% of global GDP has been invested to mitigate the immense natural degradation, which was far lower than that of extractive industries - with approximately 15%. It can be observed that actions to stem the natural crisis such as picking up flowing litters on rivers or using degradable packaging, are normally done by environmentally conscious volunteers, environmentalists as well as non- governmental organizations.
Perhaps stemming natural crisis should be given priority over other concerns, giving its importance. There are numerous ecosystem services that we could benefit from a healthy nature. Providing lively Amazon rainforests have not been cut down to make way for roads in 2010, indigenous inhabitants would have lost a reliable source of foods- which can avert mass poverty, and shelters (an array of edible flora and fauna as well as woods, gravels for building materials. Another worth noting service is disease regulation. To be more specific, when some animals carrying pathogens like mosquito, survive human intervention like habitat fragmentation while birds- their predators do not, they might reach abnormally density and could result in mass mosquito- borne illnesses such as Zika.
To conclude, governments have not allotted enough budgets on wildlife conservation. Meanwhile, it should be given more concentration over other matters in light of several merits it may bring back to us.
- Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this 89
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- Question An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online 89
- Students are becoming more and more reliant on the internet While the internet is convenient it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted How far do you agree with this statement 56
- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages to this Discuss both sides and give your opinion 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53046594982 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99855194644 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.727598566308 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.3621708792 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896965666635 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314251259562 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303015066465 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588766320921 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334975647437 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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