It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think is the reason for a growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
Nowaday, increasing of juvenicle delinquency has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Athough this problem is contributed to a whole host of reasons, some feasible solutions will be considered to addresss this.
There are several reasons can be citied to explan for the emergence of this problem. First, since youngsters. Have an excessive exposure to questionable contents, they have tend to would-be criminals. This means that vident games and movies are the main culprits for the aggressive personality of youngs people, which leads to the youngsters are willing to sole conflicts by violence. Second, by targeting young adults, drug dealers are contributed for attending on criminal acts of adolescents. There are many proofs show that human brain is susceptible to negative consequences of drug, which makes users commit crime after getting high.
There are a variety of solutions to reverse this trend. First, in order to restrict spreading of questionable contents, authorities should be carefully censored before upload. This mean that reduce the exposure of youngsters with negative contents, which reduces the growth of juvenicle delinquency. Second, if the government impose the strict and close punishments for drug trafficking, the rate of juvenile offending will be declined. For example, drug dealers and drug buyers will be send in prisons and social isolated, which is deterrence with community.
In conclusion, although this problem is caused by the number of reasons, there are not without feasible solutions for that. By raising awareness of cime prevention in society, the government will can tackle this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...ure to questionable contents, they have tend to would-be criminals. This means that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52755905512 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87351953434 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2266936572 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199036771658 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641857518013 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444905454463 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116897548983 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146168743067 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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