It is said that to become a successful businessman, tertiary education is not at all important. What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
There is a controversy on how important education plays in a personal career. Some people claimed that general education is not essential to whose who want to become an influencer in the future. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this idea.
To start with, there is a common belief that general education should be improved to teach children several useful skills. For example, at school, teachers usually train their students about leadership skills, debate skills, and problem-solving skills. These skills are really important to people who want to become a manager in the future. In contrast, citizens who do not study at high school often spend much time being fluent in these skills. Moreover, learning foreign languages is another advantage of tertiary education. The reason for this idea is that languages are the key point to communicate with multinational companies in the world, so if pupils cannot speak new languages fluently, they hardly become a leader in a company. However, people who do not follow general education usually struggle to learn new languages because of no reliable resources of information.
Furthermore, many dwellers hold the belief that academic qualifications are completely mandatory to get a position in a company. The reason for this statement is that degrees are considered to be a measurement for the abilities and academic records of interviewees. Consequently, managers can understand which abilities staffs are brilliant at and which skills they have. As a result, competitors are able to have more chances to get a well-paid job if they have diplomas. On the other hand, it is impossible for managers to assess the abilities of people who do not study in an academic environment.
In conclusion, I definitely disagree with the idea that it is not essential for children to study general education if they want to be a prosperous entrepreneur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22875816993 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01358933926 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4909759657 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154372142365 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530016080535 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322146053778 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101697929007 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410532480117 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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