It is so difficult for little ordinary people can do to improve the environmental problems today Therefore the state leader and big companies should be taking charge of solving the amount of environment damage To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

It is so difficult for little ordinary people can do to improve the environmental problems today.
Therefore, the state leader and big companies should be taking charge of solving the amount
of environment damage .
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

With environmental issues, some people opine that local authorities, manufacturers, or large companies are responsible for solving the environmental damage while ordinary people have little to contribute. However, I firmly believe that protecting the environment is the responsibility of both governments and individuals. And this essay will address the reasons for my views as follow.

For the problems of global warming, climate change, drought, storm, and floods, ordinary people cannot help much but need help from the government, and experts in that field. For example, with flooding in the Central of Viet Nam, local authorities need to take quick and timely rescue measures to help the people there. In addition, the government should have policies to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.

I believe that individuals also have a responsibility to protect the environment. As individuals, we can help in various ways, such as putting our trash in the right place, limiting the use of chemicals, using public transport instead of a personal vehicle, or planting more trees in the garden. Without the cooperation of both politicians and individuals, environmental problems will never be solved effectively. For example, people also continue to throw garbage and cut down forests that regardless of government regulations, the problem of air, soil, and water pollution will never be successfully reduced.

In brief, the environment has a significant influence on our life. I believe that protecting the environment is the obligation of both politicians and individuals.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...y will address the reasons for my views as follow. For the problems of global warming,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in brief, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63900414938 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23022049989 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593360995851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6556439855 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20147866887 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695980867759 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525916444006 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115978785548 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473020039401 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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