It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge do advantage of this development for society outweigh the advantages.
Nowadays, everyone's desire to have a car and modern electronic equipment such as a television and fridge. A majority of the population desires to have these in their life. I think that the benefits of this development in several of drawbacks run brings about more problems for society in the long run compared to any advantage It may bring.
Additionally, there are some basic benefits of this electronic product such as television, refrigerator and car are on the paramount part of life nowadays and make life easier. For instance, a refrigerator for help to store the food and do not split. moreover, Television is a source of
Information and full of entertainment for many people.
Secondly, To stay in touch with current affairs and watch the movie, news at the home. However, some feel uncomfortable with public transport and give some to have owned vehicle over the buses and trains. And having their vehicles they do not depend on the schedule.it is a symbol of status.
On the other hand, there are some issues involved in this equipment also be considered. The invention of electrical equipment like television, computers people have become lazy and do not perform outdoor activities in their free time they choose to stay in the home and watch their favourite shows and then after they suffered from health problems and as well as a West of their times. Similarly with the increasing number of the car environment will be polluting to the earth and smoke emitted from a vehicle is a health hazard.
In recapitulation, I think that electronic equipment and vehicles are paramount components of a modern time.
This development in several drawbacks in their lives.
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
- The graph below show the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
- It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car a television and a fridge do advantage of this development for society outweigh the advantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...elp to store the food and do not split. moreover, Television is a source of Informatio...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lit. moreover, Television is a source of Information and full of entertainment fo...
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Line 6, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...s and as well as a West of their times. Similarly with the increasing number of the car e...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99288256228 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86645029224 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533807829181 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6764588046 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229738976277 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728509928351 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562784189235 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985718487308 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795665561738 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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