It is suugested that everyone wants to have a car electricity and a fridge Do disadvantage of this development for society outweigh advantage

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ryone wants a car, a tv and a fridge as some of the basic things of a good lifestyle.In my ...
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Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...of the basic things of a good lifestyle.In my opinion,I believe that On a long ter...
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Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...things of a good lifestyle.In my opinion,I believe that On a long term view these ...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...ieve that On a long term view these are outweigh by the disadvantages. Admitedly, th...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , televisions
...mitedly, the growing consumption of cars,televisions and fridges has several benefits.The in...
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Suggestion: The
...isions and fridges has several benefits.The increasing sales figures of cars and ho...
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Suggestion: Another
...bs and wealth being created for society.Another benefit is that people can have a highe...
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Suggestion: Travelling
...a higher standard of living than before.Travelling on the road is no longer tedious becaus...
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Suggestion: , listening
...ous because individuals can sit in a car,listening to music and enjoying the comfort of ai...
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Suggestion: In
...njoying the comfort of air conditioning.In the same way,people may watch televisio...
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Suggestion: , people
...fort of air conditioning.In the same way,people may watch television to relax or to gai...
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Suggestion: , I
...er without being stale. Nevertheless,I believe that the above advantages are o...
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Suggestion: Primarily
...es are outweighed by potential problems.Primarily, the use of car is often help responsib...
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Suggestion: Exhaust
...responsible for environmental pollution.Exhaust emissions from automobiles impair the a...
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Suggestion: For
... and consequently affect peoples health.For example,urban citizens are suffering fr...
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Suggestion: , urban
...uently affect peoples health.For example,urban citizens are suffering from chronic res...
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Suggestion: Using
...ry problems due to the poor air quality.Using fridges and televisions also places a p...
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Suggestion: The
...sure on electricity supply in the world.The growing use of these devices in the hom...
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Suggestion: , all
...many parts of the world. In conclusion,all the available data provide concrete evi...
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Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he society, regardless of their benefits , thus ,I believe that the demerits of a ...
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Line 6, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ety, regardless of their benefits , thus ,I believe that the demerits of a tv, a c...
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Line 6, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the demerits of a tv, a car or a fridge , overshadow its merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48854961832 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53543650696 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.92273604 49.4020404114 360% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.5 106.682146367 337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.75 7.06120827912 435% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207290925928 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117257091257 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337894909621 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117257091257 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337894909621 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.2 13.0946893788 284% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 50.2224549098 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.45 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.04 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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