It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words
In these days of highly developed technology, it can’t be denied that the Internet is able to assist students in studying. Some take a view that the students had better prioritize their academic study at school rather than waste time learning on the Internet. From my point of view, I totally agree with this statement in the light of benefits we can gain from applying the Internet into education.
First of all, with the fact that intense pressure is being put on students, which requires students to build up their self-study skill. Thanks to the advent of the Internet, this can give students a deeper insight into the latest knowledge which may not be taught at school. School-aged students will stand a chance to look for courses and materials that are suitable for their level. Thus, the Internet is an enormous wealth of knowledge that can enhance students’ outcomes.
In addition, making use of the Internet assists students in enhancing their studying experience. School-aged children can have opportunities to gain knowledge by following experts’ instruction in different areas. In this way, students can develop critical thinking and solving-problem skills to practice exercise logically. Moreover, these things can pave the way for inspiring and motivating students, as the Internet allows learners to find friends to have online classroom together. When students work together in groups toward common goals of learning they can provide encouragement to each other to keep motivated toward the goals.
To sum up, the Internet plays a vital role to serve the purposes of education when provide students with an abundance of knowledge. Therefore, it is clearly undoubted that the Internet has positive effects on students’ intensive study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... children can have opportunities to gain knowledge by following experts’ instruct...
^^
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ends to have online classroom together. When students work together in groups toward...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79628032813 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.5913610699 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123303286791 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483624334784 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549643997577 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809512017887 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460609001099 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.