Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
in recent decades an increasing ton of meals are wasted by folk when they buy from hotels and markets. The impending essay will discuss my perspective on throwing cuisine and will elaborate on possible solutions for reducing the percentage of wasted cooking.
There are multiple reasons why bread is wasted after ordering from supermarkets and cafes. To begin with, the low qualification of fruit and grain is one of the main reasons because farmers utilize chemical sprays in order to harvest four times a year instead of two times causing them to become useless after a short period of days. For example, when opening a bag of apples after bringing them home from the market they become useless just after passing 34 hours Furthermore, in modern nations ,people can afford to purchase meals anytime during the day and night because there are numerous restaurants that sell junk drink this contributes them eating bread without cooking. As a result, consumers throw an increasing amount of them when they become full.
fortunately, there are two possible solutions to decrease the rate of garbaging fruits. Firstly, the government may introduce a community guideline about the negative impact of throwing meals on environmental pollution which in turn leads to people paying attention to the consumption of cuisine. As a consequence, the rate of wasting produce will decrease significantly. Secondly, farming organic fruits, grains and vegetables will increase the price of products causing few people will be able to purchase them from supermarkets. which in turn resulting the community will be more cautious about garbaging snacks.
To conclude, it is true that these days increasing percentage of foodstuffs are wasted by the public when they purchase from markets and cafe bars. In my view, availability and low quality of food are the main remedies and growing organic fruits with a social campaign will be the best way to decline the amount of waste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, in my view, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18867924528 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70728966847 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0841172611 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198056253085 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677212420793 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360711708233 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117274280066 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205016480592 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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