It's impossible to help all people in the world so governments should only focus on people in their own country. Do you agree or disagree?
Helping all people around the world is an inevitable thing and governments should concentrate on upgrade itself instead of giving help to other countries. I totally disagree that people should ignore other's needs even when they can support them to a certain degree for a couple of reasons.
First of all, one of outstanding characteristics of human which makes them back up others in tough time is humanity. For example, many volunteers choose to live temporarily in Africa where poverty and epidemics dominate all other elements because they want to give people there not only a moral support but also food and medical care. In addition, such huge global corporations as WTO, WHO, or United Nations were established to take care of people no matter what nationlity they are. As a result, we are all human being so giving help to others is the right thing.
Secondly, the other element that should be taken into account is the unity. People live in the same planet - the earth, which means that they share the same food, drink the same source of water and so on. That's why they give support to other because they have to live in harmony and try to avoid damages which could be caused by others such as neighbors, colleagues, or even strangers. Objectively, a whole country could be affected by using the same source of water which is polluted by the neighbor country. Thus, helping people can be difined as protecting ourselves.
In conclusion,each situation has it own solution, however giving others supports when they need is an ethical behaviour in most case and childrens should be taught about it at school in order to be the best citizens in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: That's
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Suggestion: , each
... protecting ourselves. In conclusion,each situation has it own solution, however ...
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Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
... In conclusion,each situation has it own solution, however giving others support...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83566433566 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56601225552 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8917696904 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196271345473 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813227715108 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648964266866 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128619546845 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781837240638 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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