A knowledge of maths is not important for most jobs nowdays. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Mathematics is part and parcel subject that everyone learns in the schools. However, In our modern world, is it really a useful tool for numerous jobs? In my opinion, I agree that the information about mathematics is no longer key for plethora of jobs, although still remains critical for some industries. This essay would shed light on the valid standpoints of this statement.
To begin with, there are lots of employments that no longer require maths knowledge. Employees do not need to perform calculations like adding up bills and calculating percentages while at work. These basic works are done by technologies such as electronic tills and computers. For instance, computer programs that can calculate invoices and future sales forecasts eliminated the necessity of doing mannual calculations. About 90% of the population is working these sort of jobs. So, it would be fair to say that, mathematics is not necessary to perform various duties. Apart from this, there are various fields such as arts, acting and literature do not rely on maths knowledge at all.
Moving further, it is important to note that there are and always will be some masses who will need for mathematics to their jobs. Arenas such as engineering and architecture require a wide knowledge of mathematics. It would be impossible for an architect to design buildings without using maths. I believe, this particular job cannot be solely performed by computers or programs. If work of these types of jobs are performing by electronic devices, then it will ruins the business. It is not only dangerous for business, but also for workers. For example, according to the survey, it can be vividly manifested that, merely a quarter of employments will depend on maths knowledge and it is necessary for them to perform their calculations by themselves. So, mathematics knowledge is a requirement of those folks, who are working in the fields of architecture and engineering. Apart from these two professions, ins and outs of mathematics is not required.
In compendium, advancement in technology, decreases the necessity of mathematics for various duties. In the epic era, the role of mathematics is played by some electronic devices. However, there are some sectors who will always rely on mathematics knowledge.
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion: research
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Suggestion:
...in the arena of mathematics is necessary for every work. In compendium, I comple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30153846154 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02353686069 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556923076923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.534089333 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0476190476 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177346176932 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565901139856 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054700722337 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118357020244 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196639703018 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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