A knowledge of maths is not important for most jobs nowdays. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Mathematics is part and parcel subject that everyone learns in the schools. However, In our modern world, is it really a useful tool for numerous jobs? In my opinion, I agree that the information about mathematics is no longer key for plethora of jobs, although still remains critical for some industries. This essay would shed light on the valid standpoints of this statement.
To begin with, there are lots of employments that no longer require maths knowledge. Employees do not need to perform calculations like adding up bills and calculating percentages while at work. These basic works are done by technologies such as electronic tills and computers. For instance, computer programs that can calculate invoices and future sales forecasts eliminated the necessity of doing mannual calculations. About 90% of the population is working these sort of jobs. So, it would be fair to say that, mathematics is not necessary to perform various duties. Apart from this, there are various fields such as arts, acting and literature do not rely on maths knowledge at all.
Moving further, it is important to note that there are and always will be some masses who will need for mathematics to their jobs. Arenas such as engineering and architecture require a wide knowledge of mathematics. It would be impossible for an architect to design buildings without using maths. I believe, this particular job cannot be solely performed by computers or programs. If work of these types of jobs are performing by electronic devices, then it will ruins the business. It is not only dangerous for business, but also for workers. For example, according to the survey, it can be vividly manifested that, merely a quarter of employments will depend on maths knowledge and it is necessary for them to perform their calculations by themselves. So, mathematics knowledge is a requirement of those folks, who are working in the fields of architecture and engineering. Apart from these two professions, ins and outs of mathematics is not required.
In compendium, advancement in technology, decreases the necessity of mathematics for various duties. In the epic era, the role of mathematics is played by some electronic devices. However, there are some sectors who will always rely on mathematics knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'maths'' or 'math's'?
Suggestion: maths'; math's
...s, acting and literature do not rely on maths knowledge at all. Moving further, it i...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'ruin'
Suggestion: ruin
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'maths'' or 'math's'?
Suggestion: maths'; math's
...a quarter of employments will depend on maths knowledge and it is necessary for them ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, still, then, while, apart from, for example, for instance, sort of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17567567568 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99621017011 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537837837838 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0088390601 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2608695652 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0869565217 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199149734916 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533696664115 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456621854726 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114777536386 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549865502056 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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