Large trades have unlimited funds for marketing and advertisement and as a consequence, customers are utterly tempted towards buying their merchandises. This essay will discuss firstly the potential negative impacts of this type of policy and secondly, the special measures which have to be adopted by the government and local business heirs to embolden consumers to purchase regional goods with relevant examples.
To begin with, unnecessary expenditures are the primary adverse effects. Take beauty products for an example. Since clients are typically convinced by the aggressive marketing, the ...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 368 350
No. of Characters: 2042 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.38 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.549 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.794 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 161 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 137 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 102 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 65 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.468 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ublic to put money into local products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66847826087 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8822953384 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6964192724 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.066666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272724778319 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816688632838 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568746642748 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156651473164 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419983465767 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.