Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People believe that massive enterprises would better give CEOs and executives higher incomes, which go far beyond those of other laborers. I completely agree with this point of view.
There are numerous reasons to support this notion. Firstly, executive managers often work under a huge amount of pressure. These managers control hundreds of staff and implement multitasking to maximize company profits. Besides, top managers make the most important decisions in the company and are responsible for any failure resulting from their decisions. For example, Steven Jobs, the co-founder of Apple, was not only a product creator but also discovered market trends. However, after he created a new product called Lisa to compete with the enemy (IBM), the company failed to sell it as expected, leading to this company encountering financial difficulties, which is why he got fired from his company to be held responsible for his wrong decision. Therefore, It is reasonable to get higher pay for senior managers.
Additionally, to gain high-level positions, individuals have a lot of experience combined with many professional degrees. They even sacrifice to work from 5 to 10 years of experience to achieve top leadership. Besides, they are willing to spend a huge amount of money to invest in their degree. To illustrate, in the competitive era, people want to study abroad to broaden their knowledge and gain a master's degree. Thus, a lucrative salary level will help them become more motivated to work hard and have a sense of financial security.
In conclusion, with high-level positions that they hold, they deserve to receive a high income due to their values in the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21111111111 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82932177887 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651851851852 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4325743344 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108455620862 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321918866103 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384533469196 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06144713874 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580217717886 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.