a large percentage of a nation's health budget should be dedicated to health education and preventive measures instead of treatment itself
For the past few years, there is little room for doubt that human beings across the world have to confront with an increasing number of serious threats, which may have irreversible and widespread repercussions on their healths and societal development. It is believed that a large percentage of a nation's health budget should be dedicated to health education and preventive measures instead of treatment itself. I partly concur on this argument.
Without a shadow of a doubt, due to the sudden advents of many types of infectious diseases, all governments have now comprehended the paramount significance of preventive healthcare. The COVID-19 pandemic, monkeypox, and children's unknown hepatitis are considered the primary culprits behind the uncertainties in nearly all nations, leading to economic and social volatility because the government bodies, particularly the department of healthcare, could not timely adopt appropriate and effective enough policies and remedies for these chaostic situations. Only by edifying the community with the fundamental knowledge about these serious diseases and their seriousness, and basic symptoms, can people raise the awareness of protecting theirselves, relatives and other ones. Therefore, this merits serious considerations that there should be more emphasis placed on preventive measures and education.
On the other hand, public investment in acute treatment still remains a considerable position in health's budget of a nation. Obviously, up to present, many diseases have yet to discover the root cause, as well as the specialised pills. To illustrate, the patients contracting with the HIV, need to take pills for the rest of life. Had not it been for the public financial supports, they may not be resilient enough in the face of the virus and adversities in life due to the discrimination of other people. Hence, there should be an appropriate sum of money spent on treatment, besides preventive measures.
From the points enlisted above, I recommend that there be a balanced division between the budget for preventive healthcare and that for treatment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...s believed that a large percentage of a nations health budget should be dedicated to he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0762810135 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609907120743 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.1266881069 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.384615385 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355061233119 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133695321342 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.24543033959 0.0667982634062 367% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214900545524 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163120636999 0.056905535591 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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