IN THE LAST FEW DECADES THE NUMBER OF STAY-AT-HOME DADS HAS BEEN INCREASING NOTICEABLY.
WHY IS IT HAPPENING?
IS IT A MORE POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE PHENOMENON?
Suitable upbringing and parenting is not only one of the most inevitable, but also the most vital components of every individual’s life. Nowadays, the proportion of staying-at-home dads who take care of their children by themselves has been increasing rapidly. Moreover, it is extremely controversial that whether or not it is a useful fact and the causes of this situation has been investigated. From my own standpoint, although it can have authentic aspects some glaring downsides are considered.
For example, higher risk of depression for dads and emotional deficits in children.
Above all, at the moment the duty of taking care and nurturing children is delegating to fathers more and more so their main responsibility is getting faded which can increase the risk of mental illness. In addition, men are considered as principal bread-winners in families and it is their instinct to try to assist and support their whole family from last eras. But in this way as a result of lack of job opportunities when they have to stay home to do their spouse’s duty, they will think they are not worthy capable enough. Accordingly, they will be disappointed bankrupt over time which is able to undergo the society high therapeutic costs.
Secondly, these days the amount of stayed-at-home fathers is growing little by little as they do not trust society or educational institutions such as kindergarten. Since the procedure of growing up is highly prominent some parents prefer to carry out this delicate process by themselves. Based on the most recent studies by municipality of Tehran, 47% of the children who are sent to educational places suffer from psychological deficits. Accordingly, because fathers are not instinctively created for bringing up descendants this fact can gender some drawbacks for that child mentally. Furthermore, men are more logical and they do not have that adequate maternal instinct to fade their child’s emotional needs.
All in all, in the last few years the society of stayed-at-home fathers is getting more and more expended in terms of lack of job opportunities or lack of trustfulness to academic systems. In my opinion although this method has its own benefits myriad drawbacks are counted in. at the end to resolve these mentioned drawbacks fathers can telecommute or to prevent childrens’ mental problems change their shifts alternatively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ver, it is extremely controversial that whether or not it is a useful fact and the causes of t...
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Line 8, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onal institutions such as kindergarten. Since the procedure of growing up is highly p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32984293194 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19638974959 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5726218396 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.764705882 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159060482905 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489369912953 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067821466188 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898671916874 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414906458997 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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