Industries and organisations are the part and parcel for a country's development. In most of the companies aged people found to be monitoring them and as leaders of these companies. A group of society reckon that ,the leadership of companies should be handed to youngsters. I am largely agree with this statement and will discuss my notions about it in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, for a company success youth plays a pivotal role because most of the workers in a organisation are young people so irrefutately,it youngsters lead the organisation, it would be more beneficial for that industry. Furthermore, younger generation have new ideas about things so , they will inculcate their ideas in all processes of a company. Additionally,today,s era is of technology and nothing can be done without technology , therefore youngsters should be appointed to mange a company because, young people have all the technical knowledge and they know better about electronic gadgets than old people.
In addition to this, there is no doubt that, young people are more physically energetic and mentally sharp than older and the post of the director or manager for any organisation always requires a person with physical fitness and mentally relaxed and active , so obviously youngsters should given the opportunity to command an directs companies. On the other hand, at some extent old people are also necessary for a company because, elder have more experiences of life rather than youngsters, they have solutions of most of the problems and they keep patience despite of any unsuccess in business,while young people sometimes take decisions in hurry and over-confident which prove harmful for company.
To recapitulate, I would like to say that,every person have great importance in their fields so age does not matter too much, whereas for a company 's development and success youngsters are more reliable than elders because they are much enthusiastic and curios about adopting new things in companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, as for, in addition, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29467084639 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09931820103 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579937304075 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.823863093 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.9 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167224357998 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656586170581 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424903982363 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943030023148 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465956149654 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.