The leaders or directorsbof organization are often older people, but some say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?
In the fast paced competitive era, usually elderly folks are administrators of any association as per the consideration of majority people as opposed to certain individuals who claim that an old person in not only requirements for leadership but also a young person can be the president of any company.
Two glaring views about various people who consider that older people have great leadership qualities are enumerated as follows. Firstly, since a company often hires well experienced people, a boss of a corporation is not willing to omit previous employees. Hence, owing to scarcity of experience, youngsters are not capable of joining a company for leadership. Secondly, undoubtedly, being an employee of any organization, patience is a must. To cite an example, almost every old person has such skill to complete his work sluggishly Whereas a young worker is unable to be a member of a company unless he has no tolerance ability. So, definitely in this respect, aged people are able to be a leader of an organization.
Despite the above mentioned striking notions regarding old humans, there are some thoughts that favour the younger generation. First of all, young people have the capability to confront any risk taking attitude. For example, danger of fire, fighting and in any emergency situation, mostly young people can solve such hurdles. The reason is that they are physically and mentally strong. What is more, in the present scenario, with the advent of technology, human life has become obviously sophisticated to completing different tasks. So, juveniles have better abilities to utilize computers, laptops or other kinds of devices. Therefore, young people play a crucial role in escalating companies' economy.
To compendium and reiterate my opinion, although according to umpteen people, gray haired people are best for leadership, a young person can also be a superior chairperson due to some vital truths that are highlighted in this essay. In my opinion, I partially concur with the given statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, first of all, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26851851852 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96462626925 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7242288596 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253887435973 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705882465835 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663454202813 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143974893361 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197411900537 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.