Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you disagree or disagree?
The 21st century has witnessed an unprecedented development in terms of technology, leading the way for some societies and living standard improvement. However, there are some people who keep the opposite claim. From my perspective, I completely disagree with the claim that human beings’ lives without technology would have more advantage. This essay will elaborate some reasons in order to give a comprehensive analysis for my personal opinion.
One of the most remarkable improvements is the ease with which technological discoveries have provided humanity. Consider how cellphones are revolutionising a variety of professions and managing the majority of daily duties. Lifting vehicles, for example, are increasingly being employed to pick up goods instead of humans. Furthermore, life expectancy has improved dramatically. To be more specific, if the infrastructure for generating vaccines and rapid delivery networks had not been in place, the Covid19 epidemic that has afflicted the world may have killed human beings.
On the other hand, some elderly people argue that technology has a detrimental impact on their daily activities since it is difficult to understand and adapt to their way of life. A survey conducted to a group of older people ranging from 55 to 80 shows that elderly might prefer a landline over a smartphone since the screen is too small to use. Furthermore, due to their unclear vision, the majority of older people have trouble utilising screen touching.
In conclusion, despite the fact that technological advancement has greatly enhanced people's lives, certain groups have found it challenging to alter their life pathways. I firmly believe that there are more advantages to modern technology than disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 431, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...to give a comprehensive analysis for my personal opinion. One of the most remarkable improvem...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...55 to 80 shows that elderly might prefer a landline over a smartphone since the s...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'altering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: altering
...ertain groups have found it challenging to alter their life pathways. I firmly believe t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53531598513 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11798638743 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650557620818 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1046436917 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0753316525207 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258317174653 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327947492022 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461616548059 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183934376422 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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