Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Every country has its own languages.When any person move to foreign country and has to speak a foreign language its really difficulties to manage.While I do admit that this can be quite challenging in the first week,in my opinion,most of the people overcome the language barrier fairly quickly.
There is no no doubt that language is the first problem that an immigrant faces in the foreign land.Not being able to speak the native language can affect their ability of socilise and make friends.It can also affect thir work,going shopping,getting medical or asking for direction can be equally challenging for someone who does not speak or understand native language.However,in my opinion,its not a big deal because of any language can be learnt with a little effort.
One more thing that make life easier for immigrants is the universal acceptance of English.More than 70% of the world population has at least accept to a working knowledge of English.This knowledge is more than enough to survive in a foreign country.Even in countries like Russia,Japan or China where English is not spoken widly,it is still possible to find people who can read,write and speak it well.
Also in order to learn new language we only have to exposed to it.If we hear a new language regularly or all the time our brain will automatically pick it uo.For this reason,learning a foreign language in a foreign country is actually easier than learning it while we are still in our country.Also people who are interested in moving abroad can do themselves a favour and learn the basics of the foreign language because packing their bags.
In conclusion,many people believe that having to converse in foreign language can cause problem for immigrant.In my opinion,this not a bid issue because with a little effort most people can learn the foreign language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, really, so, still, well, while, as to, at least, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06930693069 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08818143533 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.8206728514 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 307.2 106.682146367 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.6 20.7667163134 292% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.6 7.06120827912 348% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238053963473 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140849484934 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389418348517 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140849484934 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389418348517 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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